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I’ve decided to make Expecting a series and thought this would be a good second chapter.
But there are parts I feel could be a little stronger so I thought I would get an opinion here before I post it on ffnet. Tell me what you think and if you see any room for improvement.


( Ten minutes )

This is not for the contest. It’s just a one-shot I’ve been working on.



( Smile like you mean it  )

Well I haven’t written any fanfiction in about a year and a half so I’m more than rusty. Zelel mother’s day story was very inspirational.

I just hope this is understandable because my grammar and spelling have never been the best. What I tried to do was show what everyone was thinking about Anna’s pregnancy. I think I veered from that by getting too much into Yoh and Anna, but tell me what you think and please someone be my beta and correct me on my mistakes.


( Expecting  )

Its april 23, the weather should be nice don’t you think? Wrong! I look out my window and there is half an inch of snow on the ground. The weather was in the 80 last week and now it’s snow.

Today just seemed to drag on. Dave’s grandmother is slowly passing away. They have her on life support and I really don’t thing she is going to live much longer. He’s going to act like it doesn’t matter to him, that’s typical Dave. I know it’s going to hurt him, he’s not close with her but deep down everyone loves their grandparents.

I’m not really looking forward to this coming week.

Not that I expect anyone to be reading this.

I’m manly doing the live journal thing to talk to the people in the yoh_anna group (there should be a way I can make a link but I’m not sure how). I’m not really sure how any of this works. Guess I’ll learn as I need to.

Not much to know about me I used to write Inuyasha fanfiction but my interest in that fandom has died down quite a bit. I’ve moved on to obsessing over Yoh/Anna from shaman king. I haven’t started writing yet but I’m sure eventually I’ll crack and start writing again.

Until then I have started a yahoo group for Yoh/Anna fandom http://groups.yahoo.com/group/LoveFool1/
This is my first yahoo group so I am still learning what this is all about and how to use the various functions. I have run a forum before and I’m assuming a group is similar, just with being able to upload images into folders. That is the only difference I have noticed anyway. So well see how things go.

I may update this here and there but I think it would mostly be myself reading this. How intrusting could my life be anyway? Guess well find out.